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Peace by ~pamelaski:iconpamelaski:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


Peace is silence.
Peace is blindness.
A breath in - hold.
A breath out - hold.

The world in my mind
is quiet like the time
before a raging storm.

Peace is nothing.
Peace is a deafening
thump, thump, thump...
then slowly drift away.
©2006-2008 ~pamelaski
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Submitted: Sep 10, 2006
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I am constantly after peace. This was written when asked to define peace.

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*Spiderspirit:iconSpiderspirit: Sep 12, 2006, 8:10:21 PM
Defining peace is hard. I like your definition though! :)

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we're just another part of you.
~winged-cavalier:iconwinged-cavalier: Feb 1, 2007, 8:23:26 PM
I don't know why, but the ending seems almost comical after a fashion, and not in a bad way. It's as if this great, dramatic stage was set for "peace" to appear, and it slowly, ungracefully "thumps" into place, only to disappear without anyone realizing how or why....or maybe I just have an overactive imagination :)

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Remember the simplistic beauty in life, and revel in the spirit of all things around you.
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